twistr's audio Reviews on Newgrounds

[~Discoma~]

Cool techno add.

I like the beginning, it makes a mysterious cyberspace sound, then when the beats come in, you nail it down. It got repetitive, then went on to more to improve it. Very good stuff you displayed man.

Needs some improvement, but all it really needs is more to add on.
But other than that, its really nice.

Cheers,
-Twistr

Neogma responds:

thanx man, this is the kinda of criticism i need. ^-^ i shall keep working on bettering myself. but i dont think this song was to bad for only working on it for 3 hrs. ^-^ ;)

Neogma

[-ganon95- Dota demo]

Nice attempt.

I'm liking it. I mean, I would never have learned to have played this song. I mean, it's a nice Basshunter re-make. It is a good song, and it sounds a little better when done differently. Try to make some more techno add to it, like where the second piano roll comes in, but try to not to add too much, because I like it as it is. Nice beats, nice notes. They weren't that off either.

Keep it up man.

Cheers,
-Twistr

ganon95 responds:

its just the transition thats off

[Ccolonbackslash]

Love it

I love it. But the mario beat to it got annoying and was off-key. But other than than that, it was very good. It's great you put effort into it. Nice work. Can't wait to hear more from you!

Cheers,
-Twistr

procow responds:

Mariobeat? I don't think a beat can be off key but ok I guess ill try to change it to be on key. Next time........

[Judgment]

Good stuff

Makes you visualize yourself on a battlefield. Great build-up in sound. The music flows with emotion. Its beautiful. Shows anger and frustration along with the sympathy of the dead. You did some great visualization just with the tone. Keep it up. Can't wait to hear more.

Cheers,
-Twistr

mkron responds:

Thanks for actually listening!
That is the whole point of music, to communicate feelings.

[Distance WIP]

Love it

Melodies like this... are always good. It keeps the state of mind working and imagining. It makes people feel better and more peaceful. I like it. It's like all the melodies I would have personally requested all into one song. It's good stuff like this that keeps life moving along and people feeling better.

superchao responds:

Wow, I'm glad you like it! :) Well, I've never gotten a review quite like this before. I must say, I'm pretty flattered. :)
Thank you for your review, and I'm glad you enjoyed the track! I'll be sure to keep the same feeling throughout when I finally complete the song. :)

[Bittersweet Trance]

Hm, nice remix, but...

The song doesn't sound as good with the sound remix. I love "Bittersweet Symphony" as it is. It would have been nice to add a little violin in the background to keep up with the original placement. And the song... its going by so fast. It would have been better if you had first had it slow, then slowly and progressively got faster, but not too much.

Or maybe just slow down.

It needs more material, too.

mariomusicmaker1 responds:

Wow, a constructive review! have not gotten one of those in a long time LD

Thanks a bunch for the ideas, and now i have a great idea for the final version,
going to start off with the origonal, violin piano acustic bass, at about 80 bpm, then fade into a trance mix at this tempo, thanks for the great idea and sugestions.

[My Konnector (DnB) Preview]

A "feel-good" song.

I love all sounds like these, a void opening, then comes a catchy beat along with piano playing, and miscellaneous sounds. It's all good. Great work of sound. Its amazing how it took 5 hours to make this, when it sounds so good. Hope the whole song comes out good. Keep on going along man!

DomesticTerrorist responds:

Thanks mate! I will have the finished version sometime this week.

[Lolololo wtfffff]

It is empty. But too empty.

Well, first, it seems like you either messed up on the guitar strumming or it was intentional. Next, the guitar sound could have changed. It's boring. Then I hear pauses in this. It would be good to add some more shredding to it, or something, but anything can improve the monotone of the guitar strumming.

Ignore anyone who says not to play guitar or not even to post or make music. They're assholes. Just work on the music. I can hear some good guitar playing there. Just improve the sound, and add more beat to make it seem like a song. Then I might give you a 10.

Keep it up!

Much better than I could do.

fizzypop2 responds:

Thanks... I really don't know how to play the guitar.. I was just trying to come up with something decent for someone who sucks. lol

And I'll work on improving this. Maybe adding in a little piano after that. I don't know exactly how that'd sound but there's only one way to find out.

There was actually more and it was way more interesting than the ending the conversion software left me with. For some reason it only converted 2/3 of the song. Maybe I'll work on getting the full version in this ones place.

My final word in this response. My guitars highest and lowest strings snapped earlier so I was doing this with only 4 strings. Trust me when I say.. it feels weird trying to play with them gone.

[WalkinRain]

Great

Love it man. Keep it going.

maer808 responds:

thanks that was a fast response!